Write a description of a person you admire.external image images?q=tbn:ANd9GcS4_thiphuPP7c_fMDH08AVvC0TmWlt1hiNVaAe41Yktk0FtW1HxA

Consider:
  • Who are you going to write about?
  • Why?
    • What traits of his/her personality and/or appearance do you admire?
    • How has this person influenced you?
Planning:
Paragraph 1
  • Introduce the person and provide basic details. You may explain why you are writing about them, in a general way.
Paragraph 2
  • Describe their physical appearance. Think of at least three "cool" adjectives.
  • Mention aspects of their personality that are relevant, and prove your point providing examples of their actions. Think of at least three "cool" adjectives.
Paragraph 3
  • Important achievements
  • Interests
  • Lifestyle

Paragraph 4
  • Wrap up the description providing a summary. Provide a personal comment about him or her.

Review
  • Check your spelling, paragraphing and punctuation.
  • Make sure you have used plenty of adjectives.
  • Have you explained how and why this person has influenced you?
  • It would be nice if you included a picture.

Checklist for a personal description